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April 23, 2008
Happy Birthday
Nor shall Death brag thou wand'rest in his shade, When in eternal lines to time thou grows't: So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
The form is much too stiff and too old-fashioned It doesn’t let creative juices flow It seems to me for poems to be impassioned They have to go wherever they may go
The lines are just too long for normal speech Nobody talks—or writes—with such design I have to stuff in extra words to reach The end of every pentametric line
I hate to say it, but I’ve always found The sentiments expressed to be unpleasant I’ve never heard of one that didn’t sound Like some pathetic love-starved adolescent
When I take paper and set pen upon it I’ll write most anything—except a sonnet
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A Classical Complaint
The form is much too stiff and too old-fashioned
It doesn’t let creative juices flow
It seems to me for poems to be impassioned
They have to go wherever they may go
The lines are just too long for normal speech
Nobody talks—or writes—with such design
I have to stuff in extra words to reach
The end of every pentametric line
I hate to say it, but I’ve always found
The sentiments expressed to be unpleasant
I’ve never heard of one that didn’t sound
Like some pathetic love-starved adolescent
When I take paper and set pen upon it
I’ll write most anything—except a sonnet
(C) Lawrence A. Herman
Lawrence A Herman is not to be confused with Lawrence The Herman.
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